kah ke beti na khud se
juda kar maa
kuch din aur mehkne de
tere angan me
abhi na vida kar maa
mujhko itna bata de
maa zara
jis ghar me hun rehti
woh parayi kehte,
jis ghar jati
woh paraye ghar ki kehte
phir main kiski hun
apni bata
main prayi hun to
umar bhar rishta nibhate kyun hai
malum hai ik roz chali jaungi
dil lagate kyun hai........
har yug me uthe
yeh sawal lazmi hain
bebasi to dekh aurat ki
ji se kiye sawal
woh khuda bhi ek aadmi hai......
jane khuda ne reet kaisi hai banayi
kokh wahi hai khun wahi hai
woh beta hai apna
main beti hun parayi......
ritu saroha
8 comments:
First time m completely impressed...
First times u seems some different....
A very soul touching subject arrenged in good nazm..
Kuch line jehan se utar kar rakh raha hun..
K...
Kokh me palnaa beti koi badi baat nahee,
use dil palanaa jara badee baat hai...
waah ritu waah ,
bahut sundar rachna bani hai
lage raho munna bhai
good
ज़िन्दगी का फलसफा भी यही तो है रितु:
"जो आँख के जलते हुए सहरा से परे हैं,
बादल उसी रस्ते से गुज़रते हैं ज्यादा."
...अच्छी रचना है आपकी!
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HUm rOz naye rasto se guzrate hai....par khuCh naya nahii dekH paTe....gOya k har rOz naya hai,
har paL naYa hai....
haR raaT taazi hai.....
DeKhO rOz aaZan hoti hai....
KuCh naya naHii laGta kisi Ko....
par har aaZaN...naYe NamaziYO kO PukaRti hai.....
aIsi hi eK AazaN BaNne Ki taRaF ho tum ritu...........
pUkarO...pUri rUh se.....
saZdO ki kaMi na thi na hOgi....
saLam..
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kokh wahi hai khun wahi hai
woh beta hai apna
main beti hun parayi......
BAHUT HI ACHHI LINES HAI...
yeh bahut hi khaas nazm hai
i am completely speechless
jst amazing..
Awesome !!
Bahut badia n very true....
Sachhai likh di aapne to....
Bahut khoob
vry well said..yar...
awesome...
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