good poetry but wid too much negative intonations.
waah-waah!! kitne kam shabdon mein kitne andar ki baatein! bharsak isliye main aapki rachnaaon ka deewaana hoon.
Banaya tha maali ne jo chaman badi chaah seKaisi giri ye bijli, muskurata chaman jal gayaHar paudhe ko seencha tha pyar ke ehsas seKyun khilta hua phool pairon se masal gayaUgta tha jahan muskurate hue suraj har rozWo suraj kyun waqt se pehle hai dhal gayaJo dil jude the ek doosre se ek anjani dor seYe kaunsa ehsaas aaj un dilon ko chhal gayaKahan gayi wo mohabbat jo ek doosre se thiAapas main kyun shak ka yeh teer chal gaya !!
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good poetry but wid too much negative intonations.
waah-waah!! kitne kam shabdon mein kitne andar ki baatein! bharsak isliye main aapki rachnaaon ka deewaana hoon.
Banaya tha maali ne jo chaman badi chaah se
Kaisi giri ye bijli, muskurata chaman jal gaya
Har paudhe ko seencha tha pyar ke ehsas se
Kyun khilta hua phool pairon se masal gaya
Ugta tha jahan muskurate hue suraj har roz
Wo suraj kyun waqt se pehle hai dhal gaya
Jo dil jude the ek doosre se ek anjani dor se
Ye kaunsa ehsaas aaj un dilon ko chhal gaya
Kahan gayi wo mohabbat jo ek doosre se thi
Aapas main kyun shak ka yeh teer chal gaya !!
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