Tuesday, October 30, 2007


टकटकी लगाए देख रहा है हर शख्स,

मुझे अक्स अपना समझ कर....

जैसे लौटी हूँ शहर में

मैं आइना बन कर ......

5 comments:

kush said...

Ritu Ji

bahut sundar rachna hai ye aapki..

RATIONAL RELATIVITY said...

Dr.R,:
जैसे लौटी हूँ शहर में मैं आइना बन कर ....

TOO GOOD N METAPHORIC.

अमिय प्रसून मल्लिक said...

prasangwash arz kiya hai:--

"andaaz apna aaine mein dekhte hain wo,
aur ye bhi dekhte hain ki koi dekhta na ho"

...ritu, itna udaas hone ki koi zaroorat nahin hai mere dost. aapke paas aapko chaahnewaale kya kam hain jo aap nakaaratmak baaton ko itna tarjeeh de rahi hain?

...but, saahitya ke hisaab se thik- thaak rachna, dhyaan rahe ki ye meri apni raay hai.

pragati "pragsavee" said...

in chand panktiyon mein..bahut saara marm chupa hua hai.Ritu,

keep on writing like this..!

vimal said...

kya baat Ye _____hai JO aaP _____!!!

kaHne ke liye betaB thi .....


kabhi kabhi saB kO BHOola kar aise hi ......khud ko dekho fUrsat me .......



tum khUd ek nazm nazaR aaOgi....

ek rUbaI ke maNind...




jaB bhi kisi nigaH ne mausaM saJaye hai,
tere laBo ke pHOol bahut yaad aaye hai.....