Friday, February 29, 2008

beti


kah ke beti na khud se

juda kar maa

kuch din aur mehkne de

tere angan me

abhi na vida kar maa

mujhko itna bata de
maa zara

jis ghar me hun rehti

woh parayi kehte,

jis ghar jati

woh paraye ghar ki kehte

phir main kiski hun

apni bata

main prayi hun to

umar bhar rishta nibhate kyun hai

malum hai ik roz chali jaungi

dil lagate kyun hai........

har yug me uthe

yeh sawal lazmi hain

bebasi to dekh aurat ki

ji se kiye sawal

woh khuda bhi ek aadmi hai......

jane khuda ne reet kaisi hai banayi

kokh wahi hai khun wahi hai

woh beta hai apna

main beti hun parayi......


ritu saroha

8 comments:

swapnil said...

First time m completely impressed...
First times u seems some different....
A very soul touching subject arrenged in good nazm..
Kuch line jehan se utar kar rakh raha hun..
K...
Kokh me palnaa beti koi badi baat nahee,
use dil palanaa jara badee baat hai...

विपिन चौहान "मन" said...

waah ritu waah ,
bahut sundar rachna bani hai
lage raho munna bhai
good

अमिय प्रसून मल्लिक said...

ज़िन्दगी का फलसफा भी यही तो है रितु:

"जो आँख के जलते हुए सहरा से परे हैं,
बादल उसी रस्ते से गुज़रते हैं ज्यादा."

...अच्छी रचना है आपकी!

vimal said...

_________________________________!!
HUm rOz naye rasto se guzrate hai....par khuCh naya nahii dekH paTe....gOya k har rOz naya hai,
har paL naYa hai....
haR raaT taazi hai.....

DeKhO rOz aaZan hoti hai....

KuCh naya naHii laGta kisi Ko....


par har aaZaN...naYe NamaziYO kO PukaRti hai.....

aIsi hi eK AazaN BaNne Ki taRaF ho tum ritu...........

pUkarO...pUri rUh se.....

saZdO ki kaMi na thi na hOgi....


saLam..
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Dr. RAMJI GIRI said...

kokh wahi hai khun wahi hai


woh beta hai apna


main beti hun parayi......

BAHUT HI ACHHI LINES HAI...

Kriti.. said...

yeh bahut hi khaas nazm hai
i am completely speechless

jst amazing..

Yogesh said...

Awesome !!

Bahut badia n very true....

Sachhai likh di aapne to....
Bahut khoob

kkamana said...

vry well said..yar...
awesome...